Stalked: New Excerpt

Stalked by Allison BrennanStalked by Allison Brennan is the fifth book in the Lucy Kincaid romantic thriller series (available October 30, 2012).

A new trainee at the FBI Academy in Quantico, Lucy Kincaid has already seen more than her share of murder and mayhem. Still reeling from the sex-crime case that sealed her reputation, she’s found a true friend and mentor in Agent Tony Presidio. No matter what goes down at the Bureau, Tony’s got her back—until he’s called to New York to help investigate the murder of a reporter with ties to Lucy.

But the reporter may not be the first victim of a patient killer with a penchant for revenge, and she’s definitely not the last. Connections between closed cases, a missing person, and Tony himself lead Lucy to fear for those she cares for most. When the FBI is rocked by the death of one of their own, Lucy seeks the help of her boyfriend, private investigator Sean Rogan, to help put together the puzzle—and puts her career in jeopardy. But the harder she pushes for answers, the clearer the truth becomes: There’s a killer inside Quantico. Watching her every move. Waiting to kill again…

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Chapter 1  

Present Day—New York City

Dark cosmic humor was the only explanation as to why FBI Special Agent Suzanne Madeaux was investigating a murder at Citi Field instead of sitting on the first-base line with a beer. Proof that life wasn’t fair.

Suzanne stuffed her thick dark blond hair under her Mets cap and left her cool air-conditioned sedan for the early dawn New York summer. The weather didn’t bother her—she was born and raised in Louisiana, and New York had nothing on the South for humidity—but the noise from nearby LaGuardia grated on her nerves.

She looked up at the Citi Field stadium and sighed. She’d had a ticket to last night’s game and had to give it away because of work. Late to bed, early to rise, no time for her one vice—baseball and beer. Two vices. Now her team was on the road for nearly two weeks and she’d only be able to watch them on television. Sometimes, she hated her job.

She flashed her badge and was let under the crime scene tape. In addition to dragging her out of bed for a case outside of her jurisdiction, her boss had given her no information about why she had to get her ass out to a Queens homicide after working until two a.m. Murder didn’t usually fall under the purview of the FBI, and she had no active serial killer cases.

She’d thought taking the position of liaison with NYPD for multi-jurisdiction violent crimes would be a career boost, but the nominal pay increase didn’t come close to making up for her longer hours or the shit she had to deal with from some of the cops who didn’t like feds. She had the authority to take jurisdiction, run a case jointly, or keep it local. Considering she had tickets to the first Mets game when they returned—against the Red Sox—she definitely planned to let NYPD keep this case.

“Mad Dog!” a male voice called out.

Suzanne cringed at her nickname. She’d earned it years ago when she had a verbal battle with the media over a brutal murder, but she hated when cops used it. She turned to find the jerk in the crowd and give him the evil eye. She’d learned it from her Cajun grandmother and it worked wonders.

Instead, she said, “Shit.”

“Good to see you, Suzi.”

Detective Joe DeLucca. She should have known. Most of the cops didn’t dare call her Mad Dog anymore, but DeLucca was one of the few she couldn’t intimidate. Prob­ably because not only did he know he was sexy, but also he was one of the best detectives on the force. If she was a mad dog, he was a hunting dog—never gave up the trail until he caught the bad guy.

She stared at him. “You can call me Agent Madeaux, or you can call me Suzanne, but if you call me Suzi again, I’ll break your thumb.”

He grinned, all Italian, all cop. “Promise?” A lesser woman would have swooned. Suzanne kept the swooning in check. No use stroking his inflated ego.

DeLucca—one of her ex-boyfriends. Damn, her exes were adding up. Why was she surprised? Was she ever going to learn not to date cops?

Probably not. Cops were some of the few who under­stood her schedule, her drive, and, well, her. She never had to explain why she was late, never had to talk about her cases unless she wanted to, and never had to curb her language.

But there were certainly problems dating within her profession. Like running into ex-boyfriends at crime scenes.

“Did you call me out  here to apologize for being an asshole or because you need the big guns?”

He winked. “Maybe I just wanted to see you again.”


“Hold up. Damn, you’re touchy today.”

“It’s seven in the morning and I  haven’t had enough coffee. I’m at Citi Field, but not watching a game. And I was paged in bed, so I didn’t even get to run. No run, not enough coffee, makes me bitchy.”

Thing was, she still liked Joe DeLucca. But he was di­vorced with a psycho ex-wife and a son his ex used to keep Joe close to the nest. Suzanne  couldn’t blame Joe for picking his kid over his girlfriend. She’d do the same thing, if she had a kid. Which as she was single, thirty-five, and had had no long-term relationship in years was fast becoming unlikely.

An airplane from LaGuardia took off, drowning out whatever Joe was saying. He waited, then repeated, “Tell me how your business card found its way into my victim’s pocket.”

“Who’s the victim?”

“No ID, purse stolen. We ran plates on the nearby cars, and we think the woman is Rosemary Weber.”

“You’re not sure?”

“You tell me.”

He lifted the bright yellow tarp to reveal a body. By the extensive pool of drying blood she was killed right  here.

“It’s her. What happened?”

He dropped the tarp and stared at Suzanne. “Tell me how you know her.”

“Don’t interrogate me, Joe.” He was just doing his job, but she didn’t appreciate his all-cop tone. “I knew her be­cause she’s writing a damn book on the psycho killer who suffocated four teenage prostitutes between October of last year and February, when SWAT saved the taxpayers the cost of a trial. I worked the case with Vic Panetta.”

“Cinderella Strangler?”

She rolled her eyes. “I hate that name. The killer suf­focated the victims, took one of their shoes, and the press’s label on the case stuck.”

“Did you meet with Weber?”

“Twice, because my boss made me. The first time was brief because I was called out to a scene; the second time was the longest hour of my life, where she shared her fo­cus on the book and how she wanted my help. I told her I needed approval from national headquarters before I said one word about the case; then I pleaded with my boss to deny her request. I have no idea where it is in the process.”

Her explanation appeased DeLucca, and he said, “She was stabbed once, below the sternum, bled out fast, accord­ing to the coroner’s preliminary exam. He’s getting ready to transport the body, but I wanted you to see the layout first.” He motioned to a uniform near the coroner’s van and made a circular motion with his hands to “wrap it up,” re­leasing the body to the coroner. He stepped away and Su­zanne followed. “Body was found by two fans leaving the game at eleven thirty p.m. Coroner says she died sometime during the game, between ten and eleven. No witnesses, no physical evidence. The crime scene techs have already been through  here and they’re on a wider sweep now, I have uniforms canvassing, but what really sucks is that there are no security cameras over  here. They have them at entrances and exits, but not covering the lot itself.”

Suzanne knew that, from being a longtime patron of baseball games. Probably anyone who’d ever been to a Mets game could find loopholes in security without much effort.

“Robbery?” Suzanne asked.

“No purse, and it’s obvious the killer removed jewelry, but . . .” His voice trailed off.

“You don’t think it’s a robbery.”

“I don’t know enough yet, but in a robbery turned south I’d expect defensive wounds.”

“She had none?”

He shook his head.

“You think she knew her attacker.”

“Or he was waiting for her.”

“Meaning she was a specific target.”

DeLucca made a noncommittal grunt, but Suzanne had nailed it.

“She used to be a crime reporter, before she wrote books. I don’t envy you—there’s probably a lot of people she pissed off.”

He narrowed his eyes. “Me?”

“Yeah, you. This is a straight-up homicide, nothing federal about it.”

“Your card was in her pocket. She was writing a book about your investigation. Her murder could have a connection.”

“This isn’t federal.” Though her brain couldn’t help but tick off all the players involved in the Cinderella Strangler case. She wondered if any of them had the capacity for murder. “Now, what do you really want me for?”

“Other than naked in my bed?”

She glared at him, discreetly looking around to make sure none of the uniformed cops heard him. “Knock it off, DeLucca.”

He grinned. “Your help.”

“You don’t need my help.”

“Admitting I’m better at my job?”

“Admitting I’m swamped and don’t need another in­vestigation eating into my free time and costing me tick­ets to a winning Mets game.”

“You were  here last night?”

“Supposed to be  here. Got stuck on frickin’ paperwork on a bust I worked with your brothers in blue in Brook­lyn.” His dark eyes probed hers, and she said, “Dammit, DeLucca, you don’t need me.”

“Wallet gone, a ring appears to have been taken off her finger—we’ll confirm that with next of kin. But that car she was parked next to? The witnesses said they got  here early and tailgated. Went in just before the first pitch. Space next to them was empty because they’d spread out, so she got  here after the game started. No ticket stub found on her or in her vehicle.”


“She’s in the damn parking lot.”

“Maybe she was going to buy from a scalper. Or at Will Call. Or it’s in her missing purse.”

“We’re looking at everything. But who comes to a game alone?”

Suzanne raised her hand.

“You’re not normal.”

She rolled her eyes. “Joe, I don’t want the case.”

“New stadium, family friendly, no real history of trou­ble. Break-ins, car theft, but nothing like this. Anything about the Cinderella case that was wonky?”

“No. The killer’s dead, taken out by FBI-SWAT. Clean kill. Weber wanted to write about the whack job’s psycho head.” And she was far too interested in the two civilian “consultants” whose names  were supposed to be sealed. Damn, was Weber’s murder connected to her closed case?

“Was Weber working on anything  else?”

“Don’t know.”

DeLucca looked at her again with his damn bedroom eyes.

“Fine. You win. You want to split this?”

“I’d rather work side by side.”

“Not going there.”

“Oh yes, you will.” He grinned.

“I’ll take victimology; you take the crime scene. Let me know when the autopsy’s done, and an ETA on trace evidence. If you need the FBI lab, let me know and I’ll expedite for you.”

“Dinner, tonight.”

“Not on your life.” Suzanne started walking away. A plane flew almost directly overhead and she didn’t hear DeLucca.

“Great!” he shouted after her. “See you then!”

She turned around. “I didn’t agree to anything.”

“Sure you did. Seven p.m., Roberta’s.”


But she knew she’d be there. Worse, he knew she’d be there. It had been their favorite dinner spot when they were involved. She hadn’t been there in over a year, since they’d split.

But first things first. Time to find out what Rosemary Weber was really doing in the parking lot of Citi Field if she  wasn’t going to the game. Joe DeLucca was right—this  wasn’t a robbery. This was personal. The killer wanted Rosemary Weber dead. If Suzanne could figure out the why, it would lead them directly to the who.


Chapter 2

Fifteen Years Ago

The night my sister died, our mother gave us the Game of Life.

Mom bought us guilt presents because, as Rachel said, she knew what she was doing was wrong. She thought if we just played quietly in the attic, we’d ignore what went on downstairs. But sound travels in old  houses, and even if Mom said it was “just a party,” we knew better.

Dad had sort of finished off the attic two years ago, putting in insulation and a space heater and hooking up cable and Nintendo. It became my sanctuary, for me more than for my sister: I guess I just liked having my own private hideout. Mom bought a couple of beanbag chairs and two long, narrow throw rugs that fit the space when laid out side by side.

We  were up there with our new game the night of the last party.

It took me nearly an hour to set everything up because all of the plastic pieces came attached to one frame and I had to break each one off. I didn’t ask Rachel to help be­cause she was in a bad mood, pretending to read. I knew she wasn’t reading because she never turned a page in her book. The sound of the rain pounding on the pitched roof would have been scary if I was alone, but I  wasn’t scared with my sister here.

“Ready,” I said. “There’s no purple car; do you want blue?” Purple was Rachel’s favorite color. Blue was mine.

“You can have blue.” Rachel sighed and put the unread book down. She picked up the red car.

I began to explain the rules, but Rachel cut me off. “I’ve played it before, at Jessie’s  house.”

“Is that why you’re mad? Because Jessie said you couldn’t come over tonight?”

Rachel shrugged. “It’s not her fault.”

That was it. I had only just turned nine, but I knew my sister better than anyone, even our parents. “I wish Grams was here.”


Grams lived in Florida most of the year. Her arthritis was so bad, she could hardly walk when it was cold. Ra­chel and I always spent spring break with her, and we never wanted to come home. Grams came back to Newark in May and stayed for the summer. After Grandpa died two years ago, she stayed in the guest room and Mom and Dad didn’t have parties. They became almost normal parents.

We played quietly, but as the party got louder Rachel started getting mean. When she had to pay income tax, she leaned back and said, “I can’t concentrate.”

“It’s just the luck of the spinner,” I said. “But we can play something  else. Mario Kart?”

She closed her eyes. “I hate them.”

My stomach hurt. She was talking about Mom and Dad. I didn’t like this Rachel. I just wanted everyone to be happy and like each other.

“Remember last time when we snuck out and got ice cream?” I said. “Want to do that again?”

“It’s raining too hard. I’m not mad at you, Petey, I just don’t want to be here, okay?”

“I know.” I bit my lip. “What about poker?”

“You’ll beat me at that, too.”

“I’ll let you win.”

She laughed, and my stomach hurt less because Ra­chel’s laugh makes me smile. She jumped up and tickled me. “You’re lying, munchkin.”

I giggled. “Blackjack? Yahtzee? I’ll give you a head start on Mario Kart, a  whole lap if you want.”

Rachel sighed and rolled over to her back. The rain fell so fast I couldn’t separate individual raindrops. “Petey? Would you really want to live with Grams?”

“Live? Like forever?”

“When we visit next month, I’m going to tell Grams everything. She’ll let us stay. Maybe she’ll never come back to Newark, either. She only visits because of us.”

The pain in my stomach hurt more than ever. “Don’t do that. It’ll make Grams sad.”

She put her chin on her hand and looked at me. “I’m much older than you. I’ll be twelve next week; I know what’s best. Look at it this way: Either Grams tells Mom and Dad to stop with the stupid parties and we stay  here without all this weird stuff, or we get to live in Florida. Right? And Grams’ friend Larry will take you fishing. Remember last year? We had a lot of fun on his boat.”

True. But Dad took me fishing, too. Sometimes. I bit my lip when I remembered I hadn’t gone fishing with Dad since before Grandpa died, because Grandpa always went with us.

“Mom and Dad would be sad.” I sounded like I was going to cry, and I didn’t want to be a baby, but I didn’t want anything to change that much. I just wanted a nor­mal family.

“If they’re sad, they can cut out this shit.”

My eyes widened. “You said shit.

“So did you.”

“Only because you said it first.”

Rachel smiled at me, but it was a sad face. I wished she didn’t think I was a little kid. I was nine, in third grade, and I was smart, too. All my teachers said so. They had wanted me to skip third grade, but my parents said no be­cause I’m shorter than all the other third graders.

“Think about it, Pete, okay? I won’t say anything if you’re not okay with it.”

I didn’t believe her. Rachel was lying to me. I knew it deep down and didn’t know how I knew. Maybe because she  wasn’t looking at me? Like when she said she  wasn’t sneaking out to visit Jessie last month, but she did, anyway.

Maybe she was right and we should talk to Grams.

I didn’t want to leave.

“I’m going to my room to call Jessie. Set up Mario Kart, we’ll play when I get back, I promise.”

I did what she said and played a couple games alone while I waited for her. But she didn’t come back. I don’t know when I fell to sleep, but I woke up to thunder.

The clock on the VCR flashed 12:00. The power must have gone off and on. But it felt later than midnight. I went downstairs, feeling my way down the narrow staircase to the second-floor landing. The  house was very quiet. It smelled like it always did after a party, of stale smoke over stinky food and drink. Rachel’s light was off. I opened her door. Her night-light shined on her bed. It was empty. She must have snuck out without me. Went to Jessie’s without telling me. I started crying. I didn’t want to be alone.

I crawled into my sister’s messy bed, missing her and mad at her for leaving me.

It  wasn’t until six days later that the police found Rachel. She was dead. But in my heart, I think I’d known from the beginning.

Copyright © 2012 by Allison Brennan

Allison Brennan is the New York Times and USA Today best-selling author of eighteen novels and many short stories. A former consultant in the California State Legislature, she lives in Northern California with her husband Dan and their five children.

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  1. LaVenia Clark

    Wow!!! Sounds like this will be another Brennan thriller!!! I want the rest of the book NOW!!!

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