Criminal Element Book Club, Week 1: The Tourist by Olen Steinhauer Excerpt

Welcome to the first-ever Criminal Element Book Club. In the coming weeks, we’ll be reading The Tourist, the first book in Olen Steinhauer’s series following CIA tourist, Milo Weaver, and we want you to join us! We’ll be posting more about the series each week—including exclusive content from Olen Steinhauer about the series and his latest upcoming thriller, The Last Tourist—and we’ll open up for Q&A’s once you’ve had a chance to read, so remember to check back in and join the discussion.

We’re beginning this week with an excerpt from The Tourist. Originally published in 2009 to launch the Milo Weaver series, The Tourist hits bookstore shelves once again this month in a new paperback format. To celebrate we’re giving away 25 copies! Sign-in to the site and leave a comment on this post for a chance to win one of the 25 copies of The Tourist. Winners will be announced next week, and if you miss out on snagging a free paperback copy, you can still read along by getting a deal on the eBook for only $2.99 for the whole month of January.

The End of Tourism

Monday, September 10 To

Tuesday, September 11, 2001

Chapter 1

Four hours after his failed suicide attempt, he descended toward Aerodrom Ljubljana. A tone sounded, and above his head the seat belt sign glowed. Beside him, a Swiss businesswoman buckled her belt and gazed out the window at the clear Slovenian sky—all it had taken was one initial rebuff to convince her that the twitching American she’d been seated next to had no interest in conversation.

The American closed his eyes, thinking about the morning’s failure in Amsterdam—gunfire, shattering glass and splintered wood, sirens.

If suicide is sin, he thought, then what is it to someone who doesn’t believe in sin? What is it then? An abomination of nature? Probably, because the one immutable law of nature is to continue existing. Witness: weeds, cockroaches, ants, and pigeons. All of nature’s creatures work to a single, unified purpose: to stay alive. It’s the one indisputable theory of everything.

He’d dwelled on suicide so much over the last months, had examined the act from so many angles, that it had lost its punch. The infinitive clause “to commit suicide” was no more tragic than “to eat breakfast” or “to sit,” and the desire to snuff himself was often as strong as his desire “to sleep.”

Sometimes it was a passive urge—drive recklessly without a seat belt; walk blindly into a busy street—though more frequently these days he was urged to take responsibility for his own death. “The Bigger Voice,” his mother would have called it: There’s the knife; you know what to do. Open the window and try to fly. At four thirty that morning, while he lay on top of a woman in Amsterdam, pressing her to the floor as her bedroom window exploded from automatic gunfire, the urge had suggested he stand straight and proud and face the hail of bullets like a man.

He’d spent the whole week in Holland, watching over a sixty-year-old U.S.-supported politician whose comments on immigration had put a contract on her head. The hired assassin, a killer who in certain circles was known only as “the Tiger,” had that morning made a third attempt on her life. Had he succeeded, he would have derailed that day’s Dutch House of Representatives vote on her conservative immigration bill.

How the continued existence of one politician—in this case, a woman who had made a career of catering to the whims of frightened farmers and bitter racists—played into the hands of his own country was unknown to him. “Keeping an empire,” Grainger liked to tell him, “is ten times more difficult than gaining one.”

Rationales, in his trade, didn’t matter. Action was its own reason. But, covered in glass shards, the woman under him screaming over the crackling sound, like a deep fryer, of the window frame splintering, he’d thought, What am I doing here? He even placed a hand flat on the wood-chip-covered carpet and began to push himself up again, to face this assassin head-on. Then, in the midst of all that noise, he heard the happy music of his cell phone. He removed his hand from the floor, saw that it was Grainger calling, and shouted into it, “What?”

“Riverrun, past Eve,” Tom Grainger said.

“And Adam’s.”

Learned Grainger had created go-codes out of the first lines of novels. His own Joycean code told him he was needed someplace new. But nothing was new anymore. The unrelenting roll call of cities and hotel rooms and suspicious faces that had constituted his life for too many years was stupefying in its tedium. Would it never stop?

So he hung up on his boss, told the screaming woman to stay where she was, and climbed to his feet . . . but didn’t die. The bullets had ceased, replaced by the whining sirens of Amsterdam’s finest.

“Slovenia,” Grainger told him later, as he drove the politician safely to the Tweede Kamer. “Portorož, on the coast. We’ve got a vanished suitcase of taxpayer money and a missing station chief. Frank Dawdle.”

“I need a break, Tom.”

“It’ll be like a vacation. Angela Yates is your contact—she works out of Dawdle’s office. A familiar face. Afterward, stay around and enjoy the water.”

As Grainger droned on, outlining the job with minimal details, his stomach had started to hurt, as it still did now, a sharp pain.

If the one immutable law of existence is to exist, then does that make the opposite some sort of crime?

No. Suicide-as-crime would require that nature recognize good and evil. Nature only recognizes balance and imbalance.

Maybe that was the crucial point—balance. He’d slipped to some secluded corner of the extremes, some far reach of utter imbalance. He was a ludicrously unbalanced creature. How could nature smile upon him? Nature, surely, wanted him dead, too.

“Sir?” said a bleached, smiling stewardess. “Your seat belt.”

He blinked at her, confused. “What about it?”

“You need to wear it. We’re landing. It’s for your safety.”

Though he wanted to laugh, he buckled it just for her. Then he reached into his jacket pocket, took out a small white envelope full of pills he’d bought in Düsseldorf, and popped two Dexedrine. To live or die was one issue; for the moment, he just wanted to stay alert.

Suspiciously, the Swiss businesswoman watched him put away his drugs.

***

The pretty, round-faced brunette behind the scratched bulletproof window watched him approach. He imagined he knew what she noticed—how big his hands were, for example. Piano-player hands.

The Dexedrine was making them tremble, just slightly, and if she noticed it she might wonder if he was unconsciously playing a sonata.

He handed over a mangled American passport that had crossed more borders than many diplomats. A touring pianist, she might think. A little pale, damp from the long flight he’d just finished. Bloodshot eyes. Aviatophobia—fear of flying—was probably her suspicion.

He managed a smile, which helped wash away her expression of bureaucratic boredom. She really was very pretty, and he wanted her to know, by his expression, that her face was a nice Slovenian welcome.

The passport gave her his particulars: five foot eleven. Born June 1970—thirty-one years old. Piano player? No—American passports don’t list occupations. She peered up at him and spoke in her unsure accent: “Mr. Charles Alexander?”

He caught himself looking around again, paranoid, and gave another smile. “That’s right.”

“You are here for the business or the tourism?”

“I’m a tourist.”

She held the open passport under a black light, then raised a stamp over one of the few blank pages. “How long will you be in Slovenia?”

Mr. Charles Alexander’s green eyes settled pleasantly on her. “Four days.”

“For vacation? You should spend at least a week. There is many things to see.”

His smile flashed again, and he rocked his head. “Well, maybe you’re right. I’ll see how it goes.”

Satisfied, the clerk pressed the stamp onto the page and handed it back. “Enjoy Slovenia.”

He passed through the luggage area, where other passengers from the Amsterdam-Ljubljana flight leaned on empty carts around the still-barren carousel. None seemed to notice him, so he tried to stop looking like a paranoid drug mule. It was his stomach, he knew, and that initial Dexedrine rush. Two white customs desks sat empty of officials, and he continued through a pair of mirrored doors that opened automatically for him. A crowd of expectant faces sank when they realized he didn’t belong to them. He loosened his tie.

The last time Charles Alexander had been in Slovenia, years ago, he’d been called something else, a name just as false as the one he used now. Back then, the country was still exhilarated by the 1991 ten-day war that had freed it from the Yugoslav Federation. Nestled against Austria, Slovenia had always been the odd man out in that patchwork nation, more German than Balkan. The rest of Yugoslavia accused Slovenes—not without reason—of snobbery.

Still inside the airport, he spotted Angela Yates just outside the doors to the busy arrivals curb. Above business slacks, she wore a blue Viennese blazer, arms crossed over her breasts as she smoked and stared through the gray morning light at the field of parked cars in front of the airport. He didn’t approach her. Instead, he found a bathroom and checked himself in the mirror. The paleness and sweat had nothing to do with aviatophobia. He ripped off his tie, splashed water on his cheeks, wiped at the pink edges of his eyes and blinked, but still looked the same.

“Sorry to get you up,” he said once he’d gotten outside.

Angela jerked, a look of terror passing through her lavender eyes. Then she grinned. She looked tired, but she would be. She’d driven four hours to meet his flight, which meant she’d had to leave Vienna by 5:00 a.m. She tossed the unfinished smoke, a Davidoff, then punched his shoulder and hugged him. The smell of tobacco was comforting. She held him at arm’s length. “You haven’t been eating.”

“Overrated.”

“And you look like hell.”

He shrugged as she yawned into the back of her hand.

“You going to make it?” he asked.

“No sleep last night.”

“Need something?”

Angela got rid of the smile. “Still gulping amphetamines?”

“Only for emergencies,” he lied, because he’d taken that last dose for no other reason than he’d wanted it, and now, as the tremors shook through his bloodstream, he had an urge to empty the rest down his throat. “Want one?”

Please.”

They crossed an access road choked with morning taxis and buses heading into town, then followed concrete steps down to the parking lot. She whispered, “Is it Charles these days?”

“Almost two years now.”

“Well, it’s a stupid name. Too aristocratic. I refuse to use it.”

“I keep asking for a new one. A month ago I showed up in Nice, and some Russian had already heard about Charles Alexander.”

“Oh?”

“Nearly killed me, that Russian.”

She smiled as if he’d been joking, but he hadn’t been. Then his snapping synapses worried he was sharing too much. Angela knew nothing about his job; she wasn’t supposed to.

“Tell me about Dawdle. How long have you worked with him?”

“Three years.” She took out her key ring and pressed a little black button until she spotted, three rows away, a gray Peugeot winking at them. “Frank’s my boss, but we keep it casual. Just a small Company presence at the embassy.” She paused. “He was sweet on me for a while. Can you imagine? Couldn’t see what was right in front of him.”

She spoke with a tinge of hysteria that made him fear she would cry. He pushed anyway. “What do you think? Could he have done it?”

Angela popped the Peugeot’s trunk. “Absolutely not. Frank Dawdle wasn’t dishonest. Bit of a coward, maybe. A bad dresser. But never dishonest. He didn’t take the money.”

Charles threw in his bag. “You’re using the past tense, Angela.”

“I’m just afraid.”

“Of what?”

Angela knitted her brows, irritated. “That he’s dead. What do you think?”

 

Chapter 2

She was a careful driver these days, which he supposed was an inevitable result of her two Austrian years. Had she been stationed in Italy, or even here in Slovenia, she would’ve ignored her turn signals and those pesky speed limit notices.

To ease the tension, he brought up old London friends from when they both worked out of that embassy as vaguely titled “attachés.” He’d left in a hurry, and all Angela knew was that his new job, with some undisclosed Company department, required a steady change of names, and that he once again worked under their old boss, Tom Grainger. The rest of London station believed what they’d been told—that he had been fired. She said, “I fly up for parties now and then. They always invite me. But they’re sad, you know? All diplomatic people. There’s something intensely pitiful about them.”

“Really?” he said, though he knew what she meant.

“Like they’re living in their own little compound, surrounded by barbed wire. They pretend they’re keeping everyone out, when in fact they’re locked in.”

It was a nice way to put it, and it made him think of Tom Grainger’s delusions of empire—Roman outposts in hostile lands.

Once they hit the A1 heading southwest, Angela got back to business. “Tom fill you in on everything?”

“Not much. Can I get one of those smokes?”

“Not in the car.”

“Oh.”

“Tell me what you know, and I’ll fill in the rest.”

Thick forests passed them, pines flickering by as he outlined his brief conversation with Grainger. “He says your Frank Dawdle was sent down here to deliver a briefcase full of money. He didn’t say how much.”

“Three million.”

“Dollars?”

She nodded at the road.

Charles continued: “He was last seen at the Hotel Metropol in Portorož by Slovenian intelligence. In his room. Then he disappeared.” He waited for her to fill the numerous blank spots in that story line. All she did was drive in her steady, safe way. “Want to tell me more? Like, who the money was for?”

Angela tilted her head from side to side, but instead of answering she turned on the radio. It was preset to a station she’d found during her long drive from Vienna. Slovenian pop. Terrible stuff.

“And maybe you can tell me why we had to learn his last whereabouts from the SOVA, and not from our own people.”

As if he’d said nothing, she cranked the volume, and boy-band harmonies filled the car. Finally, she started to speak, and Charles had to lean close, over the stick shift, to hear.

“I’m not sure who the orders started with, but they reached us through New York. Tom’s office. He chose Frank for obvious reasons. Old-timer with a spotless record. No signs of ambition. No drinking problems, nothing to be compromised. He was someone they could trust with three million. More importantly, he’s familiar here. If the Slovenes saw him floating around the resort, there’d be no suspicions. He vacations in Portorož every summer, speaks fluent Slovene.” She grunted a half-laugh. “He even stopped to chat with them. Did Tom tell you that? The day he arrived, he saw a SOVA agent in a gift shop and bought him a little toy sailboat. Frank’s like that.”

“I like his style.”

Angela’s look suggested he was being inappropriately ironic. “It was supposed to be simple as pie. Frank takes the money down to the harbor on Saturday—two days ago—and does a straight phrase-code pass-off. Just hands over the briefcase. In return, he gets an address. He goes to a pay phone, calls me in Vienna, and reads off the address. Then he drives back home.”

The song ended, and a young DJ shouted in Slovenian about the hot-hot-hot band he’d just played as he mixed in the intro to the next tune, a sugar-sweet ballad.

“Why wasn’t someone backing him up?”

“Someone was,” she said, spying the rearview. “Leo Bernard. You met him in Munich, remember? Couple of years ago.”

Charles remembered a hulk of a man from Pennsylvania. In Munich, Leo had been their tough-guy backup during an operation with the German BND against an Egyptian heroin racket. They’d never had to put Leo’s fighting skills to the test, but it had given Charles a measure of comfort knowing the big man was available. “Yeah. Leo was funny.”

“Well, he’s dead,” said Angela, again glancing into the rearview. “In his hotel room, a floor above Frank’s. Nine millimeter.” She swallowed. “From his own gun, we think, though we can’t find the weapon itself.”

“Anyone hear it?”

She shook her head. “Leo had a suppressor.”

Charles leaned back into his seat, involuntarily checking the side mirror. He lowered the volume as a woman tried with limited success to carry a high E-note. Then he cut it off. Angela was being cagey about the central facts of this case—the why of all that money—but that could wait. Right now he wanted to visualize the events. “When did they arrive at the coast?”

“Friday afternoon. The seventh.”

“Legends?”

“Frank, no. He was too well known for that. Leo used an old one, Benjamin Schneider, Austrian.”

“Next day, Saturday, was the trade. Which part of the docks?”

“I’ve got it written down.”

“Time?”

“Evening. Seven.”

“Frank disappears . . . ?”

“Last seen at 4:00 a.m. Saturday morning. He was up until then drinking with Bogdan Krizan, the local SOVA head. They’re old friends. Then, around two in the afternoon, the hotel cleaning staff found Leo’s body.”

“What about the dock? Anyone see what happened at seven?”

Again, she glanced into the rearview. “We were too late. The Slovenes weren’t going to ask us why Frank was buying them toys. And we didn’t know about Leo’s body until after seven. His papers were good enough to confuse the Austrian embassy for over eight hours.”

“For three million dollars you couldn’t have sent a couple more watchers?”

Angela tightened her jaw. “Maybe, but hindsight doesn’t do us any good now.”

The incompetence surprised Charles; then again, it didn’t. “Whose call was it?”

When she looked in the mirror yet again, her jaw was tighter, her cheeks flushed. So it was her fault, he thought, but she said, “Frank wanted me to stay in Vienna.”

“It was Frank Dawdle’s idea to go off with three million dollars and only one watcher?”

“I know the man. You don’t.”

She’d said those words without moving her lips. Charles felt the urge to tell her that he did know her boss. He’d worked with him once, in 1996, to get rid of a retired communist spy from some non-descript Eastern Eur o pea n country. But she wasn’t supposed to know about that. He touched her shoulder to show a little sympathy. “I won’t talk to Tom until we’ve got some real answers. Okay?”

She finally looked at him with a weary smile. “Thanks, Milo.” “It’s Charles.”

The smile turned sardonic. “I wonder if you even have a real name.”

 

Chapter 3

Their hour-long drive skirted the Italian border, and as they neared the coast the highway opened up and the foliage thinned. The warm morning sun glinted off the road as they passed Koper and Izola, and Charles watched the low shrubs, the Mediterranean architecture, and the ZIMMER-FREI signs that littered each turnoff. It reminded him just how beautiful this tiny stretch of coast truly was. Less than thirty miles that had been pulled back and forth between Italians, Yugoslavs, and Slovenes over centuries of regional warfare.

To their right, they caught occasional glimpses of the Adriatic, and through the open window he smelled salt. He wondered if his own salvation lay in something like this. Disappear, and spend the rest of his years under a hot sun on the sea. The kind of climate that dries and burns the imbalance out of you. But he pushed that aside, because he already knew the truth: Geography solves nothing.

He said, “We can’t do this unless you tell me the rest.”

“What rest?” She spoke as if she had no idea.

“The why. Why Frank Dawdle was sent down here with three million dollars.”

To the rearview, she said, “War criminal. Bosnian Serb. Big fish.”

A small pink hotel passed, and then Portorož Bay opened up, full of sun and glimmering water. “Which one?”

“Does it really matter?”

He supposed it didn’t. Karadžic´, Mladic´, or any other wanted ic´—the story was always the same. They, as well as the Croat zealots on the other side of the battle lines, had all had a hand in the Bosnian genocides that had helped turn a once-adored multiethnic country into an international pariah. Since 1996, these men had been fugitives, hidden by sympathizers and corrupt officials, faced with charges from the UN’s International Tribunal for the Former Yugoslavia. Crimes against humanity, crimes against life and health, genocide, breaches of the Geneva conventions, murder, plunder, and violations of the laws and customs of war. Charles gazed at the Adriatic, sniffing the wind. “The UN’s offering five million for these people.”

“Oh, this guy wanted five,” Angela said as she slowed behind a line of cars with Slovenian, German, and Italian plates. “But all he had was an address, and he demanded the money up front so he could disappear. The UN didn’t trust him, turned him down flat, so some smart young man at Langley decided we should purchase it ourselves for three. A PR coup. We buy ourselves the glory of an arrest and once again point out the UN’s incompetence.” She shrugged. “Five or three—either way, you’re a millionaire.”

“What do we know about him?”

“He wouldn’t tell us anything, but Langley figured it out. Dušan Maskovic´, a Sarajevo Serb who joined the militias in the early days. He’s part of the entourage that’s been hiding the big ones in the Republika Srpska hills. Two weeks ago, he left their employ and contacted the UN Human Rights office in Sarajevo. Apparently, they get people like him every day. So little Dušan put in a call to our embassy in Vienna and found a sympathetic ear.”

“Why not just take care of it there? In Sarajevo?”

The traffic moved steadily forward, and they passed shops with flowers and international newspapers. “He didn’t want to collect in Bosnia. Didn’t even want it set up through the Sarajevo embassy. And he didn’t want anyone stationed in the ex-Yugoslav republics involved.”

“He’s no fool.”

“From what we figure, he got hold of a boat in Croatia and was going to wait in the Adriatic until 7:00 p.m. on Saturday. Then he could slip in, make the trade, and slip out again before he’d have to register with the harbormaster.”

“I see,” Charles said, because despite his returning stomach cramps he finally had enough information to picture the various players and the ways they connected.

“Want me to take care of the room?”

“Let’s check the dock first.”

Portorož’s main harbor lay at the midpoint of the bay; behind it sat the sixties architecture of the Hotel Slovenia, its name written in light blue against white concrete, a surf motif. They parked off the main road and wandered around shops selling model sailboats and T-shirts with PORTOROŽ and I LOVE SLOVENIA and MY PARENTS WENT TO SLOVENIA AND ALL I GOT . . . scribbled across them. Sandaled families sucking ice cream cones and cigarettes wandered leisurely past. Behind the shops lay a row of small piers full of vacation boats.

“Which one?” asked Charles.

“Forty-seven.”

He led the way, hands in his pockets, as if he and his lady-friend were enjoying the view and the hot sun. The crews and captains on the motor-and sailboats paid them no attention. It was nearly noon, time for siestas and drink. Germans and Slovenes dozed on their hot decks, and the only voices they heard were from children who couldn’t fall asleep.

Forty-seven was empty, but at forty-nine a humble yacht with an Italian flag was tied up. On its deck, a heavy woman was trying to peel a sausage.

“Buon giorno!” said Charles.

The woman inclined her head politely.

Charles’s Italian was only passable, so he asked Angela to find out when the woman had arrived in Portorož. Angela launched into a machine-gun Roman-Italian that sounded like a blast of insults, but the sausage woman smiled and waved her hands as she threw the insults back. It ended with Angela waving a “Grazie mille.”

Charles waved, too, then leaned close to Angela as they walked away. “Well?”

“She got here Saturday night. There was a motorboat beside theirs—dirty, she tells me—but it left soon after they arrived. She guesses around seven thirty, eight.”

After a couple more steps, Angela realized Charles had stopped somewhere behind her. His hands were on his hips as he stared at the empty spot with a small placard marked “47.” “How clean do you think that water is?”

“I’ve seen worse.”

Charles handed over his jacket, then unbuttoned his shirt as he kicked off his shoes.

“You’re not,” said Angela.

“If the trade happened at all, then it probably didn’t go well. If it led to a fight, something might have dropped in here.”

“Or,” said Angela, “if Dušan’s smart, he took Frank’s body out into the Adriatic and dropped him overboard.”

Charles wanted to tell her that he’d already ruled Dušan Maskovic´ out as a murderer—there was nothing for Dušan to gain by killing a man who was going to give him money for a simple address with no questions asked—but changed his mind. He didn’t have time for a fight.

He stripped to his boxers, hiding the pangs in his stomach as he bent to pull off the slacks. He wore no undershirt, and his chest was pale from a week spent under Amsterdam’s gray skies. “If I don’t come up . . .”

“Don’t look at me,” said Angela. “I can’t swim.”

“Then get Signora Sausage to come for me.”

Before she could think of a reply, Charles had jumped feet-first into the shallow bay. It was a shock to his drug-bubbly nerves, and there was an instant when he almost breathed in; he had to force himself not to. He paddled back to the surface and wiped his face. Angela, on the edge of the pier, smiled down at him. “Done already?”

“Don’t wrinkle my shirt.” He submerged again, then opened his eyes.

With the sun almost directly above, the shadows beneath the water were stark. He saw the dirty white hulls of boats, then the blackness where their undersides curved into darkness. He ran his hands along the Italian boat at number forty-nine, following its lines toward the bow, where a thick cord ran up to the piles, holding the boat secure. He let go of the line and sank into the heavy darkness under the pier, using hands for sight. He touched living things—a rough shell, slime, the scales of a paddling fish—but as he prepared to return to the surface, he found something else. A heavy work boot, hard-soled. It was attached to a foot, jeans, a body. Again, he fought to keep himself from inhaling. He tugged, but the stiff, cold corpse was hard to move.

He came up for air, ignored Angela’s taunts, then submerged again. He used the pilings for leverage. Once he’d dragged the body into the partial light around the Italian boat, through the cloud of kicked sand, he saw why it had been such a struggle. The bloated body—a dark-bearded man—was rope-bound at the waist to a length of heavy metal tubing: a piece of an engine, he guessed.

He broke the surface gasping. This water, which had seemed so clean a minute before, was now filthy. He spat out leakage, wiping his lips with the back of his hand. Above him, hands on her knees, Angela said, “I can hold my breath longer than that. Watch.”

“Help me up.”

She set his clothes in a pile, kneeled on the pier, and reached down to him. Soon he was over the edge, sitting with his knees up, dripping. A breeze set him shivering.

“Well?” said Angela.

“What does Frank look like?”

She reached into her blazer and tugged out a small photograph she’d brought to show to strangers. A frontal portrait, morose but efficiently lit, so that all Frank Dawdle’s features were visible. A clean-shaven man, bald on top, white hair over the ears, sixty or so.

“He didn’t grow a beard since this, did he?”

Angela shook her head, then looked worried. “But the last known photo of Maskovic´. . .”

He got to his feet. “Unless the Portorož murder rate has gone wild, that’s your Serb down there.”

“I don’t—”

Charles cut her off before she could argue: “We’ll talk with the SOVA, but you need to call Vienna. Now. Check Frank’s office. See what’s missing. Find out what was on his computer before he left.”

He slipped into his shirt, his wet body bleeding the white cotton gray. Angela started fooling with her phone, but her fingers had trouble with the buttons. Charles took her hands in his and looked into her eyes.

“This is serious. Okay? But don’t freak out until we know everything. And let’s not tell the Slovenes about the body. We don’t want them holding us for questioning.”

Again, she nodded.

Charles let go of her and grabbed his jacket, pants, and shoes, then began walking back up the pier, toward the shore. From her boat, her chubby knees to her chin, the Italian woman let out a low whistle. “Bello,” she said.

Copyright © 2020 Olen Steinhauer.


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    Love the idea of this Book Club! The book looks like a good read.

  24. Sara Lontcoski

    Can’t wait to read the rest!

  25. downeaster

    Sounds fascinating!

  26. dbeall417

    I can’t wait to read more. I already have scenes playing out in my mind!

  27. Valeri29

    Can’t wait to read this! It’s been in my TBR pile for way too long!

  28. Rachelle Lerner

    I want to find out what happens.

  29. Judy Kerr

    Totally adding this one to my TBR list!

  30. Melanie Falconer

    This sounds like a great read! Looking forward to reading it!

  31. MM

    Sounds like a great thriller! I would love to win a copy! Thank you for the chance!

  32. Kate

    This book looks like a great read! I look forward to reading more and joining the book club.

  33. Kelly M

    I can’t wait to read this. Looking forward to participating in this new book club.

  34. Ana Morales

    Wow! Can’t wait to read the rest.

  35. Ramsey Doran

    At first , brief glance, this looks like an enjoyable read. I look forward to participating!

  36. Rochelle Cullers

    I enjoy reading new authors.

  37. Rochelle Cullers

    I enjoy reading new authors, especially in this genre.

  38. Earl Messer

    What a wonderful idea. Reading with likeminded people sounds great. And an excellent first choice.

  39. Patricia Ann

    It caught my attention right from the start. I like the Balkan setting. I don’t like all the suicide talk, though, and hope it’s not a major aspect of the book. It is depressing,
    not “entertaining,” to read about that. Always looking forward to discovering a new (to me) writer.

  40. Jordan Moller

    Love mysteries. Would love to have a copy to read to my wife.

  41. Jill Carpenter

    A “new to me” author who sounds intriguing.

  42. Johannah Brookwell

    Would love to read this!

  43. Sarah Bowe

    This sounds like a great thriller, thanks for the chance!

  44. ShannonSmith

    This is a great idea, thank you for the opportunity to read a bit of the book.

  45. Noreen Brown

    Mysteries are my favorite genre. I rarely ‘solve’ it though.

  46. plwarren

    How do you pronounce Ljubljana? That’s going to bother me until I figure it out.

    • meekyn

      Basically, Loobyahna.

  47. Lisa Martin

    Sounds interesting.

  48. Viktorya C

    Thrillers are great for cold winter nights!

  49. Kelly E JACKSON

    This sounds like a great series to read!

  50. Krystal Harris

    I love Brookline and this book looks really good!

  51. Tamara Seward

    So many questions? I need answers ASAP! LOL

  52. Missy Block

    Omgah!!! This looks like such an amazing read!!!

  53. Theresa

    I’ve been wanting to read this!!! Thanks for the chance!

  54. Anne Whalen

    This is such an intriguing idea. Thanks for even this much. I look forward to the rest, one way or another. And the book club is a great idea. Thanks for putting this together.

  55. Geraldine DeAnda

    Wow, so much intrigue packed into just one day and a couple of chapters. Eager to see how the rest unfolds. Thanks for an opportunity to win.

  56. Janelle Edwards

    This sounds good. I want to read the rest.

  57. Melissa D Baird

    So excited to find a new writer to follow!

  58. Lynda Murray

    Love to learn of a new series. Would love to win this book. Definitely will read it!

  59. Karl L Stenger

    I would love to read the book.

  60. Rebecca Swanson

    What a great new idea! Thanks for the chance!

  61. Karl Stenger

    I would love to read the book.

  62. Tiffany Hampton

    I’m looking forward to this book club!

  63. Tami A Norman

    This book looks great! Thanks for the chance!

  64. Kathleen Roslasky

    Okay, after 3 chapters, I’m hooked. Can’t wait to read the rest of the book. Looking forward to the Book Club discussion.

  65. Jackie Wisherd

    I would enjoy reading this book and reporting on it at my book club.

  66. Lana Maskus

    So glad you are starting a book club.

  67. Joanne Mielczarski

    Would love to win a copy. Thanks for the opportunity.

  68. Diane

    Great start. I need to read the rest!

  69. Greg

    This looks intriguing – would love to win a copy!

  70. Traci Rowenhorst

    I’m intrigued. I love a good crime novel and mystery to solve.

  71. tom tobiasen

    what a great idea, ive never belonged to a book club before but this sounds great

  72. teresa sopher

    I enjoy Olen’s work and haven’t read this one. Looking forward to it.

  73. JMEL

    I have read a number of Steinhauer’s novels and thoroughly enjoyed them, especially Gale Force.

  74. Karen H

    Would love to have a chance to read this!

  75. TERESA WALLACE COLSTON

    Love ❤️ spy novels. I’m excited 😊

  76. Andrew Jensen

    Have never read any of Mr Steinhauer. Hooked me in just these few pages.

  77. Lmprnn0925

    Looks like something that I would enjoy reading and not be able to put down.

  78. mkear

    Sounds interesting. Thanks for the chance to obtain a copy.

  79. qhkat

    This promises to be an exciting read!

  80. Beth T.

    I’m always glad to find a new series, and I feel pretty strongly about starting at the beginning.

  81. Cheryl Koch

    I have read a few books by this author but not this one. I do like what I just read.

  82. Dannie

    Would love to win a copy. Looking forward to reading regardless of the win 😁

  83. Elaine Froneberger

    This looks so good, thanks for the opportunity!!

  84. Patricia Fultz

    Always enjoy Olen Steinhauer’s novels.

  85. Jane Schwarz

    Love to read along.

  86. Betty Smith

    Looking forward to reading the book. It looks like an interesting thriller

  87. Jill Lovinitnun

    Sounds like a great read!

  88. Phyllis Sinclair

    I’m hooked! Need the rest of it now.

  89. JackieJ

    I’m unfamiliar with this author and look forward to reading more of his work.

  90. kamala b

    Look forward to reading along

  91. Dorothy Clear

    Love this idea. After reading these chapters, I am hooked and would like to get a copy of the book. Thanks.

  92. ninarowan

    Looking forward to the book club and this book.

  93. MaryEllen Eaton

    This sounds fantastic. I love this type of story.

  94. James Kelly

    Looks like a good book.

  95. JackieJ

    the Book sounds really good and look forward to reading more.

  96. lasvegasnv

    interesting

  97. JackieJ

    l love exciting books and this looks like it will be one.

  98. Jackie Plese

    This read sounds fabulous I’m a huge suspense reader and would love to win a copy.

  99. Jenelle Rodenbaugh

    great idea! I am in

  100. gary rejsek

    Oh yeah!

  101. Kathy

    This sounds amazing and right up my alley! Looking forward to this new series!

  102. filipslady

    Well, that teaser leaves you wanting more. Hope I win one of the books.

  103. Lois A Becker

    This sounds really good. Can’t wait to read. Thanks for the chance.

  104. Lori Lynch

    Sounds interesting!

  105. royal51621

    I’ve been waiting to read this! Now I have a reason to bump it up on my tbr.

  106. JudyPitts

    I really excited to read the rest of this.

  107. Susan Stokes

    Great Idea CE/A BookClub With Such an Intriguing Book..

  108. Linda Longo

    Sounds exciting !

  109. ReadIt40

    Really excited about this Book Club. Looking forward to reading some great stories.

  110. Shannon Wise

    I haven’t read the Tourist yet, but I have enjoyed the other Olen Steinhauer books I’ve read

    • Ivka

      Love what I read so far.
      Visited Slovenia while they were still Yugoslavia.
      Thanks for the chance.

  111. Shirley Evans

    Looks so good. Love you read authors I am not familiar with and would love a chance to win.

    • Shirley Evans

      I wish my fingers were more cooperative..my post should read…Love to read, not Love you, not that I don’t love many authors.

  112. Jennifer

    I can’t wait to read more. The book club idea is great.

  113. kybooks

    The European mystery is very popular and I am glad to see that they are outside England.

  114. MPEREIRA78

    Thanks for the chance to win! Sounds great.

    • pollyhelms

      I love to read. This book sounds awesome. Cannot wait to start reading the book and the club. It all sounds great!

  115. Anne

    Thanks for this intriguing feature and giveaway.

  116. Ruth

    Sounds captivating and unique. Thanks.

  117. maxdementis

    I love a good mystery.

  118. Amy Harper

    Thank you for the chance to win a copy!

  119. pat murphy

    Looks like a great read .

  120. Susan Kraut

    An interesting start to this series. I am looking forward to reading more of it. Looking forward to the Book Club choices.

  121. Rachel Cato

    Sounds great. Can’t wait to read this one!

  122. Barbara Bibel

    Great beginning. I am heading for the library now!

  123. Riann Fletcher

    I would love to win that book! 🙂

  124. Kathy Baker

    Always enjoy discovering new authors

  125. Bobbi Smith

    This is a great idea! I can’t wait to get started with this book and book club!

  126. Mary

    This book sounds intriguing.

  127. Deborah Quinn

    Thank you and hope to read some great books.

  128. Michael Carter

    Great!
    Please enter me in this sweepstakes.
    Thanks —

  129. Ruby Homawala

    I’d love to read this book by Olen Steinhauer, who is an author I haven’t read before. It sounds great from the excerpt I’ve read.so fdar.

  130. Kathy Dobson

    Love to win!

  131. Honey

    This sounds very interesting!

  132. Lesa Neace

    Thanks for the chance to win a copy!

  133. Jessica Feher

    I love this idea. And I think I’ll love this book!

  134. Susan Johnson

    Sounds good – good luck everyone!

  135. Rachael Pendleton

    What an awesome opportunity!

  136. Anne Murphy

    Love the setting of this book. I spend too much money every month on books and really appreciate the very reasonable price of $2.99. Thank you.

  137. Brandy Ybarra

    I can’t wait to read more of this!

  138. Nancy

    Sounds fantastic. Thanks for the chance.

  139. Lisa Walters

    Wow, I’m hooked!

  140. gerri farrell

    Looking forward to reading this book.

  141. GailK

    Looking forward to reading!

  142. amy mara

    sounds good

  143. Mike Langston

    I really like the whole idea of this book club (wouldn’t mind getting a free book either).

  144. Deborah Dumm

    Very intriguing excerpt. Can’t wait to read the book. Thank you!

  145. Crystal

    Can’t wait to start reading

  146. Cat Roule

    Oh my goodness! Such a tease, reading part of a fantastic book! I need to win this! Also to be part of this book club.

  147. Katie Caprero

    Great opening. I have not previously read this book. I think this online book group will be great.

  148. Denice Langley

    An exciting start to an epic series!

  149. 1BookWorm

    Book clubSounds exciting! 📚🤞🏾

  150. ullanna

    Super excited about the book club, and being introduced to new to me authors 🙂 can’t wait to keep reading

  151. Renee Nash

    The excerpt was good! Looking forward to reading & discussing.

  152. NanaDebs

    An interesting read and will be fun to discuss.

  153. Sandra Patterson

    I really enjoyed what I’ve read so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of the book and series

  154. Leslie Ferrari

    A new book to read for the new year, what fun!

  155. Craig Thornton

    Would love to get a copy.

  156. Tricia Gilbert

    This is so good I can’t wait to read more.

  157. Darlene Torday

    Can’t wait to read more.

  158. wendyq1

    Intriguing start. Cannot wait to read more. Pls sign me up!

  159. Melissa Fairweather

    Wow sound great cant wait to finish it. I always love books clubs would love more information.

  160. Linda Peters

    Can’t wait to read more, thanks

  161. Janette Humphries

    This is awesome! I can’t wait to begin and I hope I win! Please pick me! Please!

  162. Karey L. Newton

    This author is one of the best authors I have read and the excerpt I have just read reconfirmed the reason I love reading books from this author.

  163. Debbie Johnson

    This looks like a great read!

  164. Linda McCutcheon

    I would love to Read and Review this intriguing thriller!

  165. Mary C Carnahan

    This is now on my TBR list. Thanks for the chance to win.

  166. Rose Marcin

    I have heard lots of good things about this author’s works.

  167. Mona Davis

    So excited to read this and about the book club!!

  168. Jacki

    Thanks looking forward to reading this.

  169. Jennifer Adams

    This would be a great win. Thanks for the chance!

  170. Frances Neagley

    I thought I had read Olin Steinhauer but my database says not; so this seems a perfect time to start

  171. Norma Alvarez

    Well, this book sounds interesting. Can’t wait to read it!

  172. Rose Jones

    I want to read more.

  173. sue weatherbee

    What a great read, I’d love to win this!

  174. Allison McMillan-Lee

    Good read. Slow to start. Then picked up with action. One typo: European. Too many spaces in it. Will add this to my to-read list!

  175. Aleta L Anderson

    This book club sounds exciting. I would love to win a copy of this book.

  176. pablo101

    So far so good. I’m looking forward to reading the rest of it.

  177. Deb Philippon

    Thank you for the chance to win. I think the book club is a great idea!

  178. Carol Riley

    This is a book that I will enjoy reading

  179. cyncj1

    enjoying the read

  180. Sandi Kliem

    I love this opening but need to read more now. Thanks for the new author to explore.

  181. rokrchik

    What a great book to start off this book club with. I would love to win a copy!

  182. Dee Chapman

    Enjoyed this excerpt – look forward to reading more!

  183. SusieStangland

    Bravo Criminal Element on your first book club! Would be thrilled to be one of your first members beginning with the new edition of The Tourist!

  184. OSWALDO REYES

    I would love to read this book.

  185. Melissa Lawrence

    Sounds interesting so far. I would love to win a copy. Thanks!

  186. Michelle

    Intrigued so far. Would love to read the rest!

  187. Cindy McIntyre

    I look forward to reading the book!

  188. Christina M. Fowler

    I can’t wait to read the rest! Thank you for the chance to win!!

  189. Kade gulluscio

    wow! this is definitely on my TBR list.

  190. jadelcsr

    Love that it jumps right into the action. Connect with the characters and not pages of exposition.

  191. Geneen Kudler

    I love crime stories! Sign me up for this club and book! Thank you!

  192. Wilifred Alire

    Lot’s of readers want this book, hope I’m lucky.

  193. sandra burns

    Very interested in this new book club. Plus, contests.

  194. read247ca

    Really excited to participate!

  195. Don McClure

    Thanks for the giveaway

  196. Melissa Rusu

    I’ve been looking for a book club and this sounds perfect! Enjoyed the excerpt!

  197. Lee Neel

    This looks like a good read!

  198. Sally Schmidt

    Love this idea and enjoyed the excerpt of the book. Thanks for the chance to win.

  199. sarah jane

    Crime book club- online! Great idea! I’m in!

  200. james027

    Wonderful read. Love the idea of an online book club!

  201. amygreeson

    What a great idea! The excerpt was wonderful; I look forward to reading the whole book. Thank you for the opportunity to win!

  202. Dennis

    Love the Slovenian element!

  203. Berenda J Carter

    Added to my tbr!!

  204. Martha LaChance

    I love mysteries and thrillers and would love to win a copy.

  205. revgrammy

    Look forward to reading and discussing this

  206. Susan Morris

    This will be my first encounter with Olen Steinhauer’s works. Can’t wait to read all about Milo Weaver!

  207. Stephanie L Nelson

    This sounds great!

  208. Elena

    Sounds very intriguing! I would love to read it

  209. [email protected]

    Can’t wait to read it

  210. Lynda

    First few chapters look great. I love an international mystery.

  211. ckd518

    This sounds really interesting. Thanks for the opportunity.

  212. lisawyo8

    Can’t wait to read the whole book, thank you for the prelude.

  213. jodi scott

    Thanks for giving us a teaser! Can’t wait to read the entire book!

  214. Fran Novick

    I’m interested!!

  215. Christine Smiga

    Sounds great; thanks for the chance to win!

  216. Katy Carter

    Sounds like a good book!

  217. jeanna

    I’m intrigued!

  218. Juli Allen

    Love crime drama! Looking forward to reading “The Tourist”

  219. Sandra Kitchener

    I’ve ordered the book and looking forward to diving in. I am looking forward to following the book club…. it’s been a long time since I’ve participated in a book club and I am excited to join one with a focus on the “Criminal Element”!

  220. rewob17

    I love the idea of a virtual book club – I’m much more likely to participate than if it were in person! This book looks like a great start, and of course, I would love to win a copy of the book.

  221. Melissa Keith

    OH! This book sounds fantastic. As I am having a nasty start to the New Year it would be fun to participate. Take my mind off crap and let me think of murder. lol!

  222. Debbie OShaughnessy

    I like the fact that you are providing an excerpt of the book. I usually know early on if I will like the book and this one seems to be a good candidate for my to be read list.

  223. Saundra K. Warren

    Not the genre of book I usually read but this one sounds really good!!!!

  224. Barbara Eveland

    Thank you for starting a book club! Excellent choice for book #1.

  225. John Davis

    Tension, together with verified research (Clever: Blood on a white shirt is gray! ) makes this one to read in full!

  226. Sue Dittmar

    This is a great book to start the virtual book club. What a wonderful idea! I am looking forward to ready the book as well as the discussions. Thank you very much!

  227. Sheri Supena

    Count me in. Sounds like fun.

  228. Anne Efron

    Looking forward to the book club! Nothing like a good mystery to start off a new year!

  229. Lauren

    This book sounds interesting. I have put it on my to read list.

  230. Lane McDaniel

    Looks great. The book club is a great idea.

  231. Akloonlady

    Hope I win a copy of this book- I love thrillers! Book club sounds great

  232. Donna

    Love thrillers!! Would love to win a copy!!

  233. Mariecg2011

    Love the idea of a book club! 🙂

  234. jenkovy1

    Would love a copy as well as being involved in the book club~

  235. thebrownbookloft

    I’d love to read and review this book, plus get in on the book club. Enter me in the contest!

  236. Sharon Carr

    This is too easy. brought right to our doorstep

    • Magpot

      This is just what I’m looking for for my next read. I’ve already requested it from the library!

  237. Michael Fugatt

    Definetly interested

  238. sara wright

    looks great – can’t wait

  239. Teresa Warner

    Sounds good, count me in!

  240. Maria Aylward

    I love mysteries, intrigue and suspense!

  241. Paula Perryman

    I am looking forward to reading this book.

  242. jillydee

    I’d love to read this book! Hope I can win a free copy!!

  243. Emma Cazabonne

    Some Goodreads made me hesitant, but it does sound good. I love a good spy story! Thanks for the chance to win it

  244. Sally Christiansen

    I would love to finish reading the book.

  245. Wendy Barker

    I’d love to win this book. I just finished another mystery that had the Bosnian genocides as a plot element.

  246. JenF

    Looks like a good read! Thanks for the chance!

  247. R82327

    I would love to win a copy…. Thanks for the chance

  248. Eileen O'Keefe

    Not usually a spy thriller reader but I am intrigued by the excerpt and the fact that the book is going to be part of a book club. I really enjoy book clubs.

  249. KathyBee

    Looking forward to reading this one. Sounds like an ‘antihero’ hero.

  250. Kelly Rodriguez

    Looking forward to reading this one!

  251. Jean

    The book looks very interesting. Hope I win!!!

  252. Reilly

    Looks interesting

  253. LINDA WOHLSTEIN

    So far, this book is a real page turner!

  254. Donna Peak

    I’m excited – just joined! Would love to win a book.

  255. meekyn

    What a fun book club this will be! Spy novels are out of my normal thriller reading, but since my book resolution the last two years is to get further outside my usual (last year I focused on nonfiction), this is perfect!

  256. Tawney Mazek

    If it remains as good as the beginning I definitley want to read it.

  257. atimrac

    So excited about this bookclub. Can’t wait to get started with The Tourist!

  258. Patricia Nicklas

    Great excerpt! Looking forward to reading the rest

  259. Pat Hoffarth

    Wow! Please pick me!

  260. TCasteel

    A book club via CriminalElement is a great idea.

  261. Naomi Gargano

    Looks good!

  262. Naomi Gargano

    This is my comment

  263. Shana Skaletsky

    This looks great! I’d love to be part of the book club and win a copy!

  264. Traveling Cloak

    Cannot wait to read it!

  265. Chantelle Grady

    Reminds me of the 1980s Cold War-era stories, that were often made into films.

  266. Linda McCutcheon

    I cannot believe I never heard of this book before! I would love to read, discuss and review this book as well as the new one coming out in June! Thanks for the opportunity!!

  267. Trisha

    Awesome giveaway! Book sounds very intriguing.

  268. Sara Russ

    Awesome! Can’t wait to read and follow along!

  269. Padmini Rao

    This book looks really interesting. Would love to win a copy.

  270. KathyNV

    I love Mysteries and would like to find out what happened to Frank and the 3 million! Would also like to find out more about Charles and Angela! Spies with suicide tendencies can make for a real interesting ride! 🙂 Please count me in on “The Tourist” giveaway!

  271. Esther Whatley

    Sounds intriguing. Would to win a copy.

  272. Mark W. Fetterolf

    Sounds like a intriguing read

  273. Joanne Mielczarski

    Would love to win.

  274. Kitty

    Awesome!

  275. donnaroo

    Can’t wait to read it!

  276. Margot Core

    Suicidal secret agent, tell me more.

  277. Jay

    Loved the Middleman. Would love to read this series!

  278. Joanne Mielczarski

    Thanks for this chance to win a copy of this book.

  279. Karyn Bell

    Can’t wait to read more!

  280. Christal M

    This book sounds great!

  281. Emily Heisler

    Looks fantastic

  282. Diana Hardt

    It sounds like a really interesting book.

  283. SUSAN GANNON

    I will share after reading with Senior Center. We love your books !

  284. ccrown

    Read the excerpt. Couldn’t wait. Bought my own copy. Should I win another, I’ll pass it on to a friend.

  285. Sandra Zachary

    I’m interested in a book and the contest

  286. [email protected]

    hmm, don’t know this series, but looking forward to reading it.

  287. Betty

    Very interesting!!

  288. Tiffany

    Can’t wait!

  289. Pam

    Sounds like a great read!

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