Are You Paying Attention?
By P. J. Tracy
January 11, 2021đ¨BONUS: Sign-in and comment on this post to enter for a chance to win a copy of Deep Into the Dark!
Iâm that weirdo you occasionally see at an airport gate or in a waiting room; totally anomalous because Iâm not a lonely planet orbiting around my digital sun. You canât even see evidence of a digital sun on my person, which makes me rarer than a unicorn and appreciably suspicious. Of course, you might not notice me at all because Iâm not as spellbinding as whatâs on your deviceâs screen. But if you happen to be paying attention (kudos if you are), youâre intrigued by how alert I am while doing absolutely nothing. You might wonder if Iâm a sky marshal, a stalker, orâif youâre delinquent on that loan you took out in an alley after last callâa mob enforcer. If this is the track your mind takes, you and I have a lot in common.
Iâm none of those things (though if I was, I couldnât admit it.) Iâm just a writer, watching you. Creating multiple scenarios about you and your life that might spark an idea for a novel. You might be a sky marshal or stalker or mob enforcer. You have secrets and I want to know what they are. No need to tell me, Iâll fill in the blanks. As my dearly departed mother and writing partner PJ was fond of saying: âWe get to make stuff up for a living, how great is that?â She was absolutely right. Making stuff up is great. Itâs the best one-person party game ever and a thrill that never gets old. Truly, you canât find anything online as entertaining as your own imagination. Try it sometime, you will be amazed. This is not only how I write, but one of the reasons why I write.
Iâve always been this way (you wouldnât believe the double life my kindergarten teacher led.) Consequently, I have never been bored in my life. Except for the time my father took me to a kabuki performance when I was ten. I used to wonder why such highly stylized theater put me to sleep, but Iâve figured out it was sensory overload. My own imagination is more inclined to subtlety and it couldnât compete with the clamor on stage.
A writerâs first job is to be a sponge, and there is inspiration everywhere, even in the most mundane occurrences of daily life. You have to immerse yourself entirely in your surroundings in order to craft and tell a story. That means putting the electronics away and paying attention. Before anybody gets offended, Iâm not judging you by the amount of screen time you log each day or what you do there. Distractions to allay boredom are necessary and as old as the human race. Archaeological sites from every ancient civilization reveal evidence of games and alcoholic beveragesâtwo enduring ways to keep yourself entertained. Once the goats have been milked, youâve got to do something while you wait for your new batch of wine to ferment, right? Nobody is bored when theyâre playing backgammon or drinking. Doing both at the same time is even better.
But that sort of fun doesnât fly these daysâthe digital world is too compelling, our attention spans too short and demanding to roll dice and push chips around a board, even if we are buzzed. Before phones and computers, we had to suffice with magazines and newspapers while we waited. But they are limited in scope and never entirely captivated our attention, so we would occasionally glance up and notice what was going on around us. Today, we literally have the world in our hands and in our laps. Wherever we are, we can silently conduct important business, shop, commit criminal acts, argue, propose marriage, or sign divorce papers. The convenience is very private, very myopic, and very isolating, I think. Itâs ironic that being so connected seems to ultimately disconnect us in a fundamentally human way. Participating in the world immediately around us has become a lost art.
And itâs a very important art for not just writers, but everybody. We all have an elemental need to share, connect, and communicate. Weâre not healthy if we donât. But we canât do that if we donât pay attention. Anything available online is there forever and can be accessed at our leisure, but the real moments happening in real life around us are the ones that canât be missed. They can be ordinary, sad, poignant, uplifting, or disturbing, but they happen fast and once they occur, theyâre gone forever if weâre not watching and documenting. I think of writing as an internalized form of photography. In either medium, the goal is to tell a story.
This is another reason I write. Everybody has a story, big or small, and theyâre all worth knowing. Humanity is a collection of actors in a grand play, and characters in a novel are a reflection of thatâactors on a psychological stage devised by their creators. Due diligence is the only thing that brings them to life in a substantive way. I do exhaustive research, but before my writing begins, my job is to observe and interact with as many strangers as I can at every opportunity. Thatâs the most important research I do. Even the briefest exchange can and often does inspire an entire novel. There is an appropriate time to leave behind the legitimate exhortations of parentsâdonât talk to strangers!âand dive full-on into this reckless practice of real-life interaction. (This is assuming COVID isnât permanent.)
Deep into the Dark is quite a departure from the Minneapolis-set Monkeewrench series and it was so exciting and energizing to write with an entirely fresh palette. This book takes place in Los Angeles, featuring a new cast of characters navigating thrills, chills, and general mayhem against the backdrop of the City of Angelsâ edgy urban zeitgeist. If I hadnât lived there for a decade, assiduously engaging in cultural immersion and observation, I wouldnât have been able to write about the city or the people who inhabit it. Being truly present makes life more interesting and more rewarding. Social distancing should only be physical, not psychological. And even if youâre wearing a mask, you can connect with others in meaningful ways. You might just find yourself making stuff up, too. I hope you enjoy that as much as I do.
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About Deep Into the Dark by P. J. Tracy:
Sam Eastonâa true survivorâis home from Afghanistan, trying to rebuild a life in his hometown of LA. Separated from his wife, bartending and therapy sessions are what occupy his days and nights. When friend and colleague Melody Traeger is beaten by her boyfriend, she turns to Sam for help. When the boyfriend turns up dead the next day, a hard case like Sam is the perfect suspect.
But LAPD Detective Margaret Nolan, whose brother recently died serving overseas, is sympathetic to Sam’s troubles, and can’t quite see him as a killer. She’s more interested in the secrets Melody might be keeping and the developments in another murder case on the other side of town.
Set in an LA where real people live and workânot the superficial LA of Beverly Hills or the gritty underbelly of the cityâDeep into the Dark features two really engaging, dynamic main characters and explores the nature of obsession, revenge, and grief.
P. J. Tracy is known for her “fast, fresh, and funny” characters (Harlan Coben) and her “sizzling” plots (People); the Monkeewrench series was her first, set in Minneapolis and co-written with her mother. Now with Deep into the Dark she’s on her ownâand it’s a home run.
Would love a copy
You got me at obsession, revenge, and grief.
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This would be a first for me from this author. Iâm always looking to read new voices. Keeping my fingers crossed.
I’m excited!!!!
This book looks oh so good, would love to win. Thanks for the chance.
I’d love a copy…
I would love to win this book!
Yes, a sponge! I’ve been known to record seemingly innocuous conversations, just to get the rhythm.
This mystery sounds intriguing. A fabulous author.
This is a captivating mystery. Thanks.
I have been a fan of the Monkeewrench series. The new one sounds as interesting. I’d love to win a copy.
I met you guys when I worked in Waldonbooks in Tx and I am so EXCITED for a new series. I tell every one I can to read your Monkeewrench series. (still a bookseller at heart even though I’ve moved on to another occupation.) Wishing you much success with your new series and I ordered the book today!!!
I’m a sucker for a book featuring military veterans. Every time!
I can’t wait to read this. I loved the Monkeewrench books!
Thank you for doing a giveaway!!
This sounds intriguing. I really want t read it.
I want to know about the kindergarten teacher’s double life!
looks intriguing
Yes please
Re: The digital world: “The convenience is very private, very myopic, and very isolating”. I’ve always enjoyed people watching while having to wait. It’s not as interesting now that people don’t interact with each other as much. Even people sitting together in movie theatres interact more with their devices than with their friends sitting beside them. I’m amazed at the number of lit screens I can see from the back of a movie theatre.
Thanks for the opportunity!
I’m looking forward to trying the new P.J. Tracy solo by Tracy.
I’d love to win! It looks like a great book.
Sounds like my kind of book!
Oh I have always loved your series! Would love to get a copy of this one to read right away!! Keep up the great work.
Interesting discussion of observation, especially set against the excerpt for “Deep into the Dark”. Definitely need to turn my observational skills up a few notches!
Sounds very intriguing
Can’t wait to get my hands on this new book. The discussion about observation skills was intriguing.
Loved the Monkeewrench books; so excited for a new series by P.J. Tracy!
Sounds like a greatat book!
All of your books a great and inspire me to write!
I would love a copy! As a retired librarian and former Minnesotan, I love reading books by authors from my home state.
This story sounds smashing and I am so ready to dive in!!!
Sounds great, I’d love to read it.
Sounds right up my alley.
This book sounds really, really good! Thanks so much for the chance.
Looking forward to the book.
Should I be the lucky one to win and read this book, I shall no longer be “in the dark.”
looking forward to the book
I have the series, like to try new ideas. Russian studies? High five. In college, I tried to learn a Russian song for convocation, had to pass as it didnât come easily for me as the other languages.
I loved what I read in the excerpt! I would love to win the sweepstakes!
I would LOVE to read this book from a Minnesota author, as I’m from MN too!
Sounds exciting.
Sounds good! I would love to win this.
Your essay caught my eye because our (now Zoom) Midweek Mystery Book Club (Irving, TX) has the Monkeewrench series on the 2021 schedule. I look forward to having another series to add to our list to read and discuss! Pick me!
Wow I canât wait to read this one!. The excerpt was very intriguing.
Much as I enjoy Monkeewrench, police procedurals are an earlier and ongoing love, so I’m looking forward to this new series!
Enjoyed the post. This new book is very intriguing.
Book sounds great just put a copy on hold at my library – I would love to win a copy though.
I can’t wait to read this!
Loved Monkeewrench series. I am looking forward to this new book.
Looks like my kind of book!! Thanks for the chance!!
Looks like a very interesting story.
Looking forward to reading the latest P. J. Tracy book.
Wow! I am already sucked in! I have to know what happens next! My goodness, if this was in my possession right now, I wouldn’t be able to sleep until after the last page. It sound like a true white-knuckle thrill ride! Thank you for the opportunity!
What a great beginning! Iâm hooked and canât wait to read it! Thank you for the chance!
Mesmerizing characters and plot; can’t wait to read.
I would love to win a copy.
Sounds exciting!
“A writerâs first job is to be a sponge, and there is inspiration everywhere, even in the most mundane occurrences of daily life. You have to immerse yourself entirely in your surroundings in order to craft and tell a story.” ~ P.J. Tracy
Couldn’t agree more! Congrats on the new book/series!
Welcome back to Los Angeles, at least metaphorically. Such a wide, sprawling collection of opportunities. When I was there as a teen to a young adult, it felt as if anything could happen there, in the dazzling sunlight or in the dark of the night. Looking forward to reading your take on this place that is so dear in my memories.
Read all of the Monkee series. Excited to see a new series.
I’m a huge fan of the Monkeewrench series, so I’m excited to read this new series! Thanks for the chance to win.
Looks interesting
Thank you for the opportunity to win a copy of Deep Into the Dark!
Sounds good, would be a new author for me.
I can only imagine how happy winning this book will make me.
Sounds as engaging as other PJ Tracy books.
I’ve read all of the Monkeewrench books and have been waiting for this book. It sounds terrific. Love her style and characters.
I would love to win.
Yes, please enter me in this sweepstakes.
Thanks!
Saw your name and my heart stopped for a second. My step-son, who died 15 years ago, was Patrick James Tracy – PJTracy. The headline I saw said “P J Tracy’s highly anticipated return…” Needless to say my heart skipped a beat..
Hi, Okay, You have me at the excerpt! I adore the cover of your book, also…
Many thanks, Cindi
I have been a fan of the Monkeewrench series by what was then the great Mother/ Daughter writing team since the first book I read. So happy P.J. Tracy has continued to write. Thanks for this opportunity.
I love writing but I am not created enough to make up stories! Thank you for writing yours.
Would love a copy, I would love a copy! Thanks for the opportunity!
Excited for a new book from you!
I’ve read some of her older books and really enjoyed them. Would love to read her new series!
You are a new author for me. Thank you for the opportunity.
Looks like a great read!
Sounds like a book I would love to win. This is a new author for me. So thanks for a chance to win.
I was born in LA as was many generations before me. Yes, many. I’m always looking at how LA is portrayed and so am very interested in the new book. Plus ALWAYS interested in a new read!
Can’t wait
Looks like a fantastic read!
ooh- looks like a thriller with lots of plot to offer!
would love to have a copy of this book-signed if possible, of course. thank you for the opportunity to win one.
Sounds fascinating!
I have enjoyed your Monkeywrench series. This series sounds like it would be an equally great read. Thanks for inviting us to enter for a free book.
Can’t wait for this new book!
This is my kind of book.
I loved hearing the author speak, here, & talk about writing. I am really looking forward to reading this book. Iâve never read this author, but sheâs good. Book looks great!
I’d love to read this, as it sounds intriguing. Thanks for the chance to win.
I enjoyed your post about people-watching. The book sounds very compelling
This new series sounds very interesting. I love that it is written about the layer of LA that most authors ignore. It is nit crazy, glitzy Beverly Hills and it is not the underbelly of LA. I would truly love to have a copy of this book.
Sounds like a winner to me!
I like your opening. In my experience we all recall more about and event than we realise.
Can’t wait to see you tonight at the Once Upon a Crime event!
I love to people watch too. It will be nice to read about L.A. in its real setting, because it is certainly not the glamorized So Cal location people make it out to be.
Sounds like a really fun read!
Love you and your momâs Monkeewrench series.
Looking to your new series set in L.A.
I can’t wait! I loved the Monkeewrench series!
wow-wow-wow! Sounds fascinating!
Interesting article about writers. Book sounds great.
This is gonna be great!!
I have been looking out for this new release; so excited for a chance to read it. Thanks so much for the chance.
You are the “Ultimate People Watcher”! Can’t wait to start this series.
I am currently reading Dead Run and am so glad that I found this series. I look forward to your new one.
I am always looking for new authors to read. This book sounds like the kind I enjoy reading.
Sounds like a great read
Thanks.
Sounds like a book I would enjoy reading.
Ah Finally I cant wait to get my hands on this even if its not with the Monkee wrench crew I Love all your books.
Sounds like an awesome book!
Your post is fascinating, like your books.
I mean, the cover alone is enough to purchase this one!
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This would be a fascinating book! Thanks đ
I would love to read this book! Thanks!
Can’t wait!